We have being using a program called Pobble 365 to help motivate us to write. This is what Tom wrote after looking at a picture of an old railroad track.
Once upon a time there was an old abandoned, rusty railroad. A tree grew magically through it. It was a deep, dark forest. A tiger was running away from his home. He saw the magic tree, the tiger tried to knock it. He got shot in the butt by a hunter!
Sophie- Tom I like that you added a lot of detail.
ReplyDeleteZara- Tom I like how you "Said he got shot in the bottom" it was funny.
Joshua- Tom, I like how you used adjectives.