Tuesday, May 30, 2017


  • WALT: Write detailed sentences
  • SC:
  • My sentence starts with a capital letter
  • My sentence ends with punctuation - . ? !
  • My sentence makes sense when I read it
  • My sentence has at least one adjective in it
  • My sentence has at least one verb in it

The sea cow is eating sea grass at the bottom of the green water. By Karma

Sea cows have big tails to sweep. By Joel

A sea cow lives in the warm shores. By Joshua.

They like shallow water and they like warm water. By Asha

Sea cows are really big and they use their tails to move. By Hugh

Sea cows eat seaweed to survive. By Jack

Sea cows are not fast, they are big water animals. By Nicholas

They are gray and they have short arms. By Sam

They are nice, gentle creatures. By Tom

Sea cows live in clear water, it is a big animal. By Dinaya

A sea cow is a big animal that swims slowly in the water. By Ted

Sea cows swish their tails in the green sea to move. By Lily

They eat at the bottom of the turquoise sea. By Max

It’s tail is flat like a sea cucumber. By Izzy

Sea cows live in shallow water, they also eat seaweed. By Indy

Sea cows are so heavy!!! They move through the water very slowly and they eat soggy seaweed. By Annah

What is a sea cow? It is a nice, graceful animal.   By Frankie

Sea cows move in slow motion. By Neili

The sea cow is eating grasses. By Cody

They eat sea grass from the bottom of the clean water. By Sophie

Sea cows are lovely and beautiful. By Dakota

Tuesday, May 16, 2017



We watched a video on volcanoes and then wrote an explanation in our own words.

 Asha went back and did some editing.
 Ted tried to remember to put full stops at the end of his sentences.

 Lily wrote one and a half pages.
Sophie referred back to her plan.


  1.  Tyde well and truly met his goal of writing more than one sentence.



Nicholas used resources to help him spell words correctly.