Thursday, March 10, 2016

We are exploring how people can express themselves in many different ways. We studied a painting by Van Gogh and then wrote sentences to describe how we felt, what we thought of, when we looked at it.


It makes me feel like in a warm winter night. It makes me feel warm. It makes me feel proud and brave.
By Thore


It makes me feel happy, it reminds me of a really cool picture. It was the best picture I have ever seen.
By Jacques


This picture makes me feel happy because I love Autumn because the leaves are pretty. It is a pretty place, it has beautiful lights.
By Issy


The picture makes me feel relaxed. It makes me feel relaxed because it looks quiet and beautiful and calm. It is a beautiful because the street lights are on and the colour in the trees are nice and the branches look real and the pathway is shiny because it is rainy. It makes me feel really comfortable.
By Madeline

Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Writers Eyes

WALT: Proofread our writing
SC: 
I can put on my writers eyes
I can check my punctuation
I can check my spelling
I can read my work and make sure it makes sense




Tuesday, March 1, 2016

WALT: 
Plan before we write
SC: 
I can think of a topic
I can think of several things related to the topic
I can use pictures to plan
I can use words to plan





Lilli-Rose, Ben, Jarred and Issy have all used different ways to plan before they write.